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Hebi Lacerta
Genin
Hebi Lacerta


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PostSubject: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeThu Dec 06, 2012 7:57 pm

Snake Scroll Summoning-template
Snake

The five stages of the initial summoning process:

1.
Hatchling - a tiny snake no longer than 6 inches, this stage is normally a small viper with a red and black scale pattern. At this point in the growth cycle the serpent has net even grown its first pair of fangs. This stage of serpent will remain summoned for several minutes and will start attempting to bite on the summoner's fingers with its gums which is completely harmless until time runs out.

2. Infant - Slightly larger than the hatching stage the infant never exceeds 12 inches in length. Still looking something like a viper this stage still does not quite have it's fangs yet but it does have a full set of normal teeth which is able to bite into skin rather easily. Luckily for the summoner though the infant doesnt attempt to bite, rather it curls around the summoner's forearm and lightly squeezes as it attempts to build up its constriction muscles (this is not enough pressure to stop blood flow or pain).

3. Adolescent - The serpent is now getting to the mid point in its growth cycle, maxing out at 24 inches in length the animal now has a fully developed set of teeth complete with fangs. While still looking like the next stage in a viper's life the serpent no longer has it's red and black scale coloration, rather it has changed into a more dingy brown color that seems to distinguish it as rapidly approaching maturity. In the few minutes that this serpent remains before being un-summoned it simply bobs its head back and forth while locking eyes with the summoner while hissing calmly.

4. Shedding - At this point the serpent is almost fully grown, maxing out at 36 inches in length now the animal is now in the strangest cycle of its life that is shown during the summoning process. Upon being summoned the viper is stationary and curled up on itself in a coil. It's skin is loose a flaky at some parts. This stage normally takes around an hour to be completed, just before the animal is un-summoned it rapidly strikes forward or in another direction where there is no resistance of something in the way and shed it skin completely revealing that it is slowly starting to regain a black and red complexion but this time in a more metallic way.

5. Adult - This is the final stage of the viper's growth cycle, at this point is is around 60 inches long with a powerful and muscular body and jaw. It's teeth are extremely sharp and dripping with venom, it eyes golden yellow. Its scales are a very proud ebony and ruby color that seems to shine in the sunlight. While summoned for a few minutes the serpent slithers around the summoner and the general area casually looking around.



Free Use Summons:

C Rank Summon


Shiro
Rank of Summon: C
Element Affinity: -
Family: Snake
Personality: Shiro isn't cruel like a lot of the other snakes, but he is rather self centered and lazy, he dislikes being summoned but he respects the contract and if he is summoned he will do whatever his summoner wishes him to have done. He yawns often in the middle of his sentences, his yawn isn't like normal yawns however it sounds like a sigh that ends with "sssss".
Size: 20 feet long, six inches across. 175 lb
Description: Shiro is a rare white viper, his scales the same color as ivory and his eyes are a emerald green. A thick deep crimson outline surrounds each of his eyes and seems to add a slight intimidation factor to those who look at him. His mannerisms are quite normal, often shooting his tongue out to taste the air and get a better understanding of his surroundings. Unlike many snakes though Shiro has two sets of teeth in his mouth (while still only having one set of fangs), these teeth are able to shred through flesh with ease.
appearance:

Abilities/Techniques:

Base Speed: Shiro is able to slither along at 20 mph, not quite matching the speed of the average human chunin but easily out pacing a run-of-the-mill genin.

Speech: Like most summons Shiro has the ability to speak to humans as well as other serpents, his voice does have a definite hiss to it though which results in a large emphasis on the letter S when talking.

Chakra Venom: Added to all of his bite attacks it a venom that attacks his target's chakra system. This venom has the ability to cause whoever he bites to lose 10 chakra instantly, should this bring someone down to or below 0 chakra they pass out. This venom is unable to be used during the post following him biting someone successfully.

Constriction: Like most serpents Shiro has an ability to use his body to squeeze his prey. Being a serpent that focuses more on venom than constriction however he is only able to cause enough pressure that blood flow slows but no internal damage occurs. If this ability is used while biting someone however it allows the venom to be twice as effective which results in a drain of 20 chakra.


B Rank Summom

Kobura
Rank of Summon: B
Element Affinity: Doton
Family: Snake
Personality: Kobura is a but snobby, he considers himself above everyone else and expects to be treated with respect. He refers to himself as 'lord' but not when the higher ranking snake summons are around. He follows orders well but doesn't like be treated with disrespect.
Size: 35 feet long, 22 inches circumference. 780 lb
Description: Kobura is a black rattler-type snake, he has razor sharp fangs that are 4 inches long and can easily cut through flesh. He behaves like a normal snake but he also has the ability to speak. He is a quite snake, contemplating the meaning of life and death,so usually does not talk unless the conversation is compelling and deep.

Appearance:

Abilities/Techniques:

Base Speed: Kobura can slither along the ground at 40 mph, equal to the average Special Jounin.

Speech: As with most summons Kobura has the ability to speak, although like most other snake summons he tends to put much emphasis on, and slur, his S's.

Strangling Glare: 1 post chargetime. Kobura has the ability to cast a genjutsu on those who look at him. This Genjutsu causes the target to see themselves being constricted by millions of snakes, and then snakes will start going inside their mouth, this of course is just a genjutsu and doesn't actually happen, but it keeps the target from moving anything from their shoulders down for 3 posts. Afterwords, it reduces speed and reaction in the victim for two posts by 20% while they regain themselves. This can be broken through Kai or pain. 5 post cooldown.

Slither Ocean: 1 post chargetime. Kobura casts a genjutsu on the target if the target looks at him while he rattles his tail. This Genjutsu makes the target see themself being swallowed by a giant snake, and then inside the snake there is an ocean of smaller snakes. The user sees themself drowning in this sea and being bit multiple times all over their body. This takes 3 posts. The first post they are swallowed, the second post they begin drowning, the third post they are bit many times. During the first post they experience complete blindness, the second post they begin having trouble breathing, which slows their body's function ability down, and the third post they will receive great mental damage. It can be broken out of with kai or pain. If the target is in the genjutsu for 1 post before they break out, they will suffer from mild tunnel vision for two posts, if they are in the genjutsu for 2 posts before they break out, they will receive a 20% loss to speed for 2 posts. If they are in the genjutsu for all 3 posts, they will experience both the effects of 1 and 2 for two posts after: not being able to move for one post after. During this illusion they cannot move about freely. 6 post cooldown.

A Rank Summon

Magaius
Rank of Summon: A
Element Affinity: Raiton
Family: Snake
Personality: Magaius is a monster, he loves being summoned purely because it usually gives him the opporunity to kill, he respects the summoner but is unhappy if he wasn't summoned to do battle, even if he is though he obeys his summoner begrudgingly. He is cruel to any of his opponents and often belittles them with rude remarks.
Size: 200 feet long, 10 feet circumference, 2500 lb
Description: Magaius is a sick, twisted snake. He loves death and blood, one of his most favorite feelings is the feeling of the bones breaking in the people he constricts, and their blood being squeezed out like a lemon's juice. He is large, and brown, and efficient in combat, he follows orders well as well.

appearance:

Abilities/Techniques:

Base Speed: Magaius can move along at 55 mph, the same speed as an average jonin.

Speech: Like most summons Magaius can also speak, but like most snakes he puts emphasis on, and slurs, his S's.

The Devil's Shell: 1 post of charging. After chakra is charged, the snake sheds a layer of it's skin (this takes approx. 8 seconds). After the shedded skin lays still for one post (can be destroyed with an A rank jutsu of any kind), the shell of skin fills itself in with a new body, creating a perfect clone of itself. This clone lasts for 5 posts, and is identical in every way. 4 round cooldown after the clone disappears, usable twice a topic.

Constriction of the Storms: Requires 1 post of charging. When initiating the jutsu, the snake flies forward to reach the target at twice his regular speed for a maximum of 100 feet. Magaius wraps around his target and holds them there. He uses his Raiton Release to energize himself with lightning and shock the target, this however doesn't affect him. This lightning can cause 3rd degree electrical burns. The sheer strength of the crush breaks all bones as well. Only usable once a topic.
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Shizen Tekuta
Shinkage
Shizen Tekuta


Male Character Age : 29
Posts : 242
Ryo : 5195

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeFri Dec 14, 2012 1:06 am

Completed, with last two credit to phade.
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Neo
Sabakukage
Neo


Male Character Age : 28
Posts : 308
Ryo : 20000

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeFri Dec 14, 2012 1:53 am

Slither Ocean:
"they will receive a 20% loss to speed"
Code:
For how long?
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Kushino
Genin
Kushino


Female Character Age : 14
Posts : 143
Ryo : 13100

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeFri Dec 14, 2012 1:55 am

bumpetty bump bump [IN PLACE OF SHIZ, WE ARE WORKING ON THIS TOGETHER]
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Neo
Sabakukage
Neo


Male Character Age : 28
Posts : 308
Ryo : 20000

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeFri Dec 14, 2012 1:57 am

And now without further adieu, Snake Scroll Archer10
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Tora
Tsundorakage
Tora


Female Character Age : 25
Posts : 94
Ryo : 19101

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeFri Dec 14, 2012 2:02 am

I shall buy this, 5000 from Tora's money and 10000 from Phade's money

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Takoda
Chūnin
Takoda


Character Age : 14
Posts : 517
Ryo : 4600

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 7:04 pm

Snake Scroll Yeah-no

Mkay a few things, as this was the initial test family for the new system the templates were not complete when we put them together. I went in and added the code for the personality section on each snake so fill that out and we can take a second look at the abilities and stuff.

The core family is still approved and people can start summoning snakes although the open use summons are locked until we finish going over them.
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Tora
Tsundorakage
Tora


Female Character Age : 25
Posts : 94
Ryo : 19101

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 5:14 pm

Bump. Personalities added
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Takoda
Chūnin
Takoda


Character Age : 14
Posts : 517
Ryo : 4600

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeWed Dec 19, 2012 3:59 pm

Mkay, since the family name that came through in the end was simply 'Snake' all these summons would need to have that under the family section rather than specific sub-species.

The B rank seems a tad light, a 35 foot long snake a a bit of a monster and would probably weight 600-900 pounds I think.
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Tora
Tsundorakage
Tora


Female Character Age : 25
Posts : 94
Ryo : 19101

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeWed Dec 19, 2012 4:20 pm

Bump
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Takoda
Chūnin
Takoda


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Ryo : 4600

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeWed Dec 19, 2012 4:32 pm

Strangling Glare - needs both a charge time and a cool down

Slither Ocean - same as before with a charge time and cool down. In addition, the chakra cost to break out is a tad high since its a B rank ability it should only cost B rank chakra to break out meaning drop the 40 to 30. Also, there is nothing saying what the opponent is able to do while under this illusion so are the stuck standing still? Because 3 post of no movement and blindness from the illusion I dont think we can let fly.
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Tora
Tsundorakage
Tora


Female Character Age : 25
Posts : 94
Ryo : 19101

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeWed Dec 19, 2012 4:56 pm

Bump
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Kama Hyuga
Jōnin
Kama Hyuga


Male Character Age : 15
Posts : 44
Ryo : 0

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 6:10 pm

Shouldn't there be a price on all three of the summons? Because I thought the 15k was just for the initial summoning jutsu and D rank that comes with it

I only ask because I am taking control of this family and am buying the three snakes listed.
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Ventus
Chūnin
Ventus


Character Age : 21
Posts : 156
Ryo : 18050

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 6:45 pm

Im probably just gonna help brad revamp these seeing as how the A rank was designed to be a personal summon for phade and the B rank is sub par anyway. Kama could go ahead and summon snakes fow now seeing as how the only thing to be reworked is the scrolls static summons, just cant buy these until they get priced is all.
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Kama Hyuga
Jōnin
Kama Hyuga


Male Character Age : 15
Posts : 44
Ryo : 0

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 7:00 pm

How about I just revamp them? I'll just make the A less personal and the B not subpar?
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Ventus
Chūnin
Ventus


Character Age : 21
Posts : 156
Ryo : 18050

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 7:09 pm

Feel free
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Kama Hyuga
Jōnin
Kama Hyuga


Male Character Age : 15
Posts : 44
Ryo : 0

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 7:16 pm

on dat ish
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Kama Hyuga
Jōnin
Kama Hyuga


Male Character Age : 15
Posts : 44
Ryo : 0

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 7:43 pm

Couldn't find anythign inherently wrong with the description of the A-rank, but I fixed some jutsu and boofed up the B rank more. Tis ready for inspection.
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Yuurei
Genin
Yuurei


Male Character Age : 23
Posts : 235
Ryo : 5803

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 10:39 pm

B Rank is approved

A Rank:

Crushing Coil: Add a 1 post charge.
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Bryn T. Stormblood
Yamakage
Bryn T. Stormblood


Male Character Age : 21
Posts : 506
Ryo : 10220

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeMon Mar 25, 2013 11:04 pm

Bumpenheimer
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Ventus
Chūnin
Ventus


Character Age : 21
Posts : 156
Ryo : 18050

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeTue Mar 26, 2013 1:30 am

Shiro - 2k

Kobura - 3.5k

Magaius - 6k
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Bryn T. Stormblood
Yamakage
Bryn T. Stormblood


Male Character Age : 21
Posts : 506
Ryo : 10220

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PostSubject: Re: Snake Scroll   Snake Scroll Icon_minitimeTue Mar 26, 2013 1:34 am

Purchasing with Bryn's Ryo for Kama
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