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PostSubject: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 07, 2013 5:36 am

Name: Binding Chakra Chains: Level 1
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Barrier Ninjutsu)
Distance: 30 feet
Description: Hand seals, after their hand seals the caster places their palm on the ground. A glowing circle appears around the caster's hand from which three chakra chains form, each the durability of iron. All of these chains end with a harpoon style blade that shoot out at the target at 15 mph. Should the target be hit by the chains they are paralyzed and bound in place either unless they can break the chains (strength of iron) or wait until the technique ends. The chains do not actually tear open the flesh of the victim, rather they pass through them and lock in place, there is a sensation of pain as though these were normal blades though. The chains themselves are able to have seals placed onto them, the seals will work as they are designed but the only difference is the Harpoon then a hand. This technique normally only lasts for one round though the caster is able to remain stationary and pump chakra into their hand (and in turn the circle the chains are from) to extend that duration. This extension works at a rate of 10 chakra per round for each extra round (maximum of 3 rounds). 4 round cool down.


Name: Binding Chakra Chains: Level 2
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Barrier Ninjutsu)
Distance: 60 feet
Description: Hand seals, after their hand seals the caster places their palm on the ground. A glowing circle appears around the caster's hand from which six chakra chains form, each the durability of steel. All of these chains end with a harpoon style blade that shoot out at the target at 25 mph. Should the target be hit by the chains they are paralyzed and bound in place either unless they can break the chains (strength of steel) or wait until the technique ends. The chains do not actually tear open the flesh of the victim, rather they pass through them and lock in place, there is a sensation of pain as though these were normal blades though. The chains themselves are able to have seals placed onto them, the seals will work as they are designed but the only difference is the Harpoon then a hand. This technique normally only lasts for one round though the caster is able to remain stationary and pump chakra into their hand (and in turn the circle the chains are from) to extend that duration. This extension works at a rate of 10 chakra per round for each extra round (maximum of 3 rounds). 6 round cool down.


Name: Binding Chakra Chains: Level 3
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Barrier Ninjutsu)
Distance: 100 feet
Description: Hand seals, after their hand seals the caster places their palm on the ground. A glowing circle appears around the caster's hand from which nine chakra chains form, each the durability of titanium. All of these chains end with a harpoon style blade that shoot out at the target at 40 mph. Should the target be hit by the chains they are paralyzed and bound in place either unless they can break the chains (strength of titanium) or wait until the technique ends. The chains do not actually tear open the flesh of the victim, rather they pass through them and lock in place, there is a sensation of pain as though these were normal blades though. The chains themselves are able to have seals placed onto them, the seals will work as they are designed but the only difference is the Harpoon then a hand. This technique normally only lasts for one round though the caster is able to remain stationary and pump chakra into their hand (and in turn the circle the chains are from) to extend that duration. This extension works at a rate of 15 chakra per round for each extra round (maximum of 3 rounds). 8 round cool down.


Name: Binding Chakra Chains: Level 4
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Barrier Ninjutsu)
Distance: 150 feet
Description: Hand seals, after their hand seals the caster places their palm on the ground. A glowing circle appears around the caster's hand from which twelve chakra chains form, each the durability of corundum. All of these chains end with a harpoon style blade that shoot out at the target at 55 mph. Should the target be hit by the chains they are paralyzed and bound in place either unless they can break the chains (strength of corundum) or wait until the technique ends. The chains do not actually tear open the flesh of the victim, rather they pass through them and lock in place, there is a sensation of pain as though these were normal blades though. The chains themselves are able to have seals placed onto them, the seals will work as they are designed but the only difference is the Harpoon then a hand. This technique normally only lasts for one round though the caster is able to remain stationary and pump chakra into their hand (and in turn the circle the chains are from) to extend that duration. This extension works at a rate of 15 chakra per round for each extra round (maximum of 3 rounds). 10 round cool down.




Example of the Chains:
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 07, 2013 10:03 am

Alright going over these and they seem ok to me,

Approved

which ones did you want priced up now?
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeTue Apr 09, 2013 10:51 am

Price A Rank Please :)
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeTue Apr 09, 2013 12:01 pm

Name: Chakra Concentration Burst: Level 1
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: -
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Distance: 15 feet / Self
Description: Handseals, after handseals the user will place a seal on either their left or right arm causing it to glow a feint red color. This seal allows the user to channel large amounts of chakra into wherever the seal was placed and allows the user to release it in sudden bursts through their pours, such as chakra bullets that are fired from the users hands. These bullets are the same size as Kunai and are often just as sharp (Bronze Durability). The second use is the user can channel the chakra to their fingernails that will create large and sharp finger nails capable of small cuts no deeper then an inch {Durability of Bronze). The jutsu will remain for three posts before it slowly fades.. The Seal will remain even after the jutsu has stopped but will fade once the Topic is over. 5 posts cooldown.
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Due to the small amount of Chakra used the users arms will be fine and no damage will be caused.

Name: Chakra Concentration Burst: Level 2
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: -
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Charge, after Charge the user will place the second seal on the same arm the Level 1 seal was placed unto causing it to glow a feint red color, meaning the seals have stacked. This seal allows the user to channel large amounts of chakra into wherever the seal was placed and allows the user to release it in sudden bursts through their pours. During Level 2 the amount of chakra that leeks from the users pours increases. Now instead of just their Finger nails the chakra covers their fingers as well (Durability of Iron) and can now cause deeper cuts or wounds. The jutsu lasts a duration of four posts and by the second post small burning pains will start to be felt. 6 posts
Cooldown.

Due to the increased amount of Chakra used the users fingers will show signs of small burns that will cause small but frequent sharp pains.

Name: Chakra Concentration Burst: Level 3
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: -
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Distance: 30ft / Self
Description: Charge, after Charge the user will place the second seal on the same arm the Level 1 and 2 seal was placed unto causing it to glow a feint red color. This seal allows the user to channel large amounts of chakra into wherever the seal was placed and allows the user to release it in sudden bursts through their pours. During Level 3 the amount of chakra that leeks from the users pours increases once again. Much like the Chakra Kunai blasts, the first ability allows the user to focus large bursts 5 ft in diameter that head toward its target at 40mph. Now instead of just their Finger nails and fingers the chakra now covers their entire fist (Durability of Steel) allowing the user a 20% increase in strength. Due to the pain caused their reaction time is decreased by 15%. The jutsu lasts a duration of five posts and by the second post the sharp burning pains will increase. 8 posts Cooldown. Once per Topic.

Due to the increased amount of Chakra used the users fist will now show signs of large burns marks, the pain created is much like 2nd degree burns and as such causes the user great discomfort.

Name: Chakra Concentration Burst: Level 4
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: -
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Distance: 45ft / Self
Description: Charge, after Charge the user will place the second seal on the same arm the Level 1, 2, and 3 seal was placed unto causing it to glow a feint red color. This seal allows the user to channel large amounts of chakra into wherever the seal was placed and allows the user to release it in sudden bursts through their pours. During Level 4 the amount of chakra that leeks from the users pours increases once again. Much like the Chakra Kunai blasts, the first ability allows the user to focus large bursts 5 ft in diameter that head toward its target at 40mph that can inpale the target with incredible force that can break or even shatter bones. Now instead of just their Fist the chakra now covers their entire arm (Durability of Titanium) allowing the user a 30% increase in strength. Due to the pain caused their reaction time is decreased by 20%. The jutsu lasts a duration of six posts and by the third post the burning pains will increase. If the user reaches the Sixth post while still using this jutsu their arm will be useless for the rest of the topic due to the nerves being burnt away. 10 posts, Twice per topic .

Due to the increased amount of Chakra used the users arm will now show signs of larger burns marks, the pain created is much like 3rd degree burns and as such causes the user great and at times unbearable pain.


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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeTue Apr 09, 2013 12:10 pm

Ok and done... ready to be gone over.
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeTue Apr 09, 2013 7:22 pm

Prices for chakra chains:

D Rank - 3500 ryo
C Rank - 5500 ryo
B Rank - 7500 ryo
A Rank - 9500 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 1:57 am

D, C , B are free I only needed A Rank priced. Plus I kinda wanted the other Jutsu gone over >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 9:19 am

Alright, how does neutral chakra leave burning?

Also, cool downs should be numbered, not "Normal cool down." I think they should go like this:
5 posts
6 posts
8 posts
10 posts/Twice per topic
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 9:23 am

Well with the mass amount of chakra being channeled to one arm and then leaked out through the pours.. besides its a large amount of chakra outside the body that is around the arm.
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 9:27 am

That still doesn't explain how it burns. Neutral chakra cannot burn because there is no element attached to it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 10:01 am

Hmmm well to be honest I just thought it needed some kind of drawback? Its much like Tailed Beast Chakra Arms. Ok I suppose ill edit it out then :P
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 1:54 pm

that can cause 3rd degree burning and even inpale the target with incredible force that can break or even shatter bones.

It says that in the damage of each jutsu. I understand it burning yourself, but others, no
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 2:44 pm

Ummm it says that in one jutsu? and thats fine I can remove the burning.
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeWed Apr 10, 2013 5:45 pm

Do that, leave the self burning, then bump (This bagley hacking Tsyuo's account
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeThu Apr 11, 2013 3:53 am

HACKER! XD ... Okies Edit :P
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 21, 2013 3:29 am

Can I get these done please? I have more Jutsu I want to register :P
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 21, 2013 3:35 am

just make em, we can get these done when we get more approval mods
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 21, 2013 12:10 pm

Name: Chakra Chain Barrier
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu (Barrier Ninjutsu)
Distance: 50ft radius
Description: The user must charge a large amount of Chakra to one palm for six posts, after their hand seals the caster places their palm to the ground. From their palm, seals sprout that cover a 50ft radius in all directions. The seal will sprout six different ways from where the user placed their palm. Once the seals have formed from each point a single chain will shoot out and travels in an upward at motion at 55mph to meet the center which will connect to the other chains. Once this is done the jutsu activates and a barrier is created, this barrier is strong enough to withstand two A-Rank Attacks but anything below will require a larger amount of attacks. While inside people are unable to leave the barrier until it breaks or the jutsu is released, the same aspect for those trying to enter inside. The jutsu lasts one posts but In order to sustain the barrier 20 chakra every round is required. After the barrier is destroyed or released the barrier and chains will shatter glass like then evaporate into nothing.

Examples of Jutsu:

Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Chakra_chains_barrier1_zpsa39e9b77

Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Chakra_chains_barrier2_zps82367bcd
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PostSubject: Re: Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration]   Kushino Uzumaki [Technique Registration] Icon_minitimeSun Apr 21, 2013 1:56 pm

Chakra Concentration Burst:

Level 1: 3500

Level 2: 5500

Level 3: 7500

Level 4: 9500
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